writing a recount

Monday October 19

Yay we are going   to go to Napier. It was a long ride we stopped at the waka falls and looked at the at all of the people looking for prones and then we had to go through the gorge to get Hawke's bay and and then we had to go through Hastings and then we arrived at Napier. First I plugged my xbox in the tv and the played first game. I played was Counter strike and then I went to go watch some tv for 5 minutes and then my mum said do you want to come for a ride? And I said yes were to. We went to the video ezy to get some games but there was no xbox games there but we went to united video And there was only 6 games there so me and my brother had to pick 2 games each so I got This ninja game And shark tale and my brother got a rugby game and Redick and then we went to the supermarket and bought some drinks. And my big brother made us something to eat that was dinner. Then we had to go to sleep  and when it was day time I went into my mums room but she was still asleep we had 3 days at my kokos house so me and my family went for a big ride down to see my my great great grandma she was so old we had to be so nice to her and be very very quiet so me and my big brother jacob went inside to see my grandpa we said hi and we hanged them and we was so so nice it was so great so see my grandma and my grandpa and then we went to go saw cousins and my uncles and my Auntie and my cousins dog called Cj and then we and then we went to got see my nephews and when we got there I went straight to the playstation and I played force at the back yard it this shooting game and there zombies at at the back yard and we have to shoot thall of the zombies before they reach the house.