Reversing sentenses

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. named is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

My copy

Miss Paton has a cat thats called Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain. He really like to sniff  rubbish. He always come to my house starving. Oscar likes to what's He disappointed with Miss Paton laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar like me to give him the attention.

Today I have been learning  about the word DRAFT . DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing . Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands of Delete In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in wicth we had to delete take out words and change sentenses