how to make a paper airplane

LI: Is to write a procedural text
here i have got my how to make a paper airplane in this slideshow i have got all the instructions on how to make a paper airplane.  

Anaylsing a Narrative

This is our Burger Narrative by Aiden,Caesar,Joseph and Malakai.,

Revising writing

yesterday and today I have been working with shailah.we had to read over a sample pice of writing.

On Saturday I was at my Papa's, Aunts, and Uncles, house getting ready for halloween. When I saw my Papa he was dressed up as a  zombie he was really spooky. I was dressed up as a purple bat,. when I was ready  I looked  a bit  spooky.I was ready for halloween

Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies.

I went to a house that was very black and very spooky my Papa got scared I told him don’t worry It's just a house  full of declaration.There  were spiderwebs and bats and witches declarations  I knocked on the door and out came a freaky ghost man and a lady gave us happy treats I said to them next I went down to another house that wasn't spooky as it was cool going trick or treating we had a good time. knocked on the door and out came a black witch the lady gave us chocolate and chocolate

candy pumpkins.

When we stopped at Kings road we saw my friend Zahra and her Dad and her Baby. They were going trick or treat treating for yummy treats. me and my Papa were walking to Zara we asked could we come with you to

get yummy treats they said yes when we stopped down at the Cafe we had

a hot chocolate and a strawberry cupcake than we went back down to coates cress  to go to other houses for trick or treating  

When we saw another house that was even scarier.I said happy trinkle treat and out came a spider he gave us lollies and chocolate it was fun at halloween. It was time to go home I said bye to my friend Zara and went home to eat all the goodies.   

Writing a recount

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels	Yay we are going to go to Napier, it was a long ride. We stopped at the Waka falls and looked at all of the people looking for prawns. Then we had to go through the Gorge to get Hawke's Bay. Then we had to go through Hastings and then we arrived at Napier. First I plugged my XBox into the TV and the first game I played was Counter strike.
Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs Write in the past tense Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia Use connectives	I went to go watch some tv for 5 minutes. Then my Mum said “Do you want to come for a ride?” I said “Okay let's go”. We went to  Video ezy to get some games, but there were no Xbox games in there. We went to United Video and there were only 6 games there, so me and my brother had to pick 2 games each. I got this ninja game and Shark Tale. My brother got a rugby game and Redick. We went to the supermarket and bought some drinks. My big brother made us something to eat for dinner. Then we had to go to sleep  and when it was day time I went into my mums room. She was still asleep. We had 3 days at my kokos house, so me and my family went for a big ride down to see my my great great grandma. She was so old, we had to be so nice to her and be very very quiet. Me and my big brother Jacob went inside to see my Grandpa. We said hi
Conclusion Sums up how you felt about the experience.	and we hung out with them. It was so great so see my grandma and my grandpa. Then we went to go to see my cousins, my uncles and my Auntie. My cousin had a dog called CJ. After this we went to got to see my nephews. When we got there I went straight to the Playstation. I played force at the back yard. It was this shooting game and there were zombies in the backyard. We had to shoot all of the zombies before they reached the house.

writing a recount

Monday October 19

Yay we are going   to go to Napier. It was a long ride we stopped at the waka falls and looked at the at all of the people looking for prones and then we had to go through the gorge to get Hawke's bay and and then we had to go through Hastings and then we arrived at Napier. First I plugged my xbox in the tv and the played first game. I played was Counter strike and then I went to go watch some tv for 5 minutes and then my mum said do you want to come for a ride? And I said yes were to. We went to the video ezy to get some games but there was no xbox games there but we went to united video And there was only 6 games there so me and my brother had to pick 2 games each so I got This ninja game And shark tale and my brother got a rugby game and Redick and then we went to the supermarket and bought some drinks. And my big brother made us something to eat that was dinner. Then we had to go to sleep  and when it was day time I went into my mums room but she was still asleep we had 3 days at my kokos house so me and my family went for a big ride down to see my my great great grandma she was so old we had to be so nice to her and be very very quiet so me and my big brother jacob went inside to see my grandpa we said hi and we hanged them and we was so so nice it was so great so see my grandma and my grandpa and then we went to go saw cousins and my uncles and my Auntie and my cousins dog called Cj and then we and then we went to got see my nephews and when we got there I went straight to the playstation and I played force at the back yard it this shooting game and there zombies at at the back yard and we have to shoot thall of the zombies before they reach the house.  

writing a recount

Monday october 19

Yay we get to go to Napier It was a long ride we stopped at the waka falls and looked at the at all of the people looking for prones and then we had to go through the gorge to get Hawke's bay and and then we had to go through hastings and then we arrived at Napier and First I plugged my xbox in the tv and the first game I played was Counter strike and then I went to go watch some tv for 5 minutes and then my mum said do you want to come for a ride And I said yes were to. We went to the video ezy to get some games but there was no xbox games there but we went to united video And there was only 6 games there so me and my brother had to pick 2 games each so I got This ninja game And shark tale and my brother got a rugby game and Redick and then we went to the supermarket and burt some drinks And my big brother made us something to eat that was dinner. Then we had to go to sleep  and when it was day time I went into my mums room but she was still asleep but when mum work up we had to get when we were ready we went home it took 6 hours to get back the end.

This is my recount about going to Napier.

Recount Writing

Today I have been learning about writing a oirentaion and a hook. A hook is when you have a fun beggining. A oirentaion is when you use these words: What, When, How, Who, Why and Where.

Reversing sentenses

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. named is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

My copy

Miss Paton has a cat thats called Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain. He really like to sniff  rubbish. He always come to my house starving. Oscar likes to what's He disappointed with Miss Paton laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar like me to give him the attention.

Today I have been learning  about the word DRAFT . DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing . Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands of Delete In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in wicth we had to delete take out words and change sentenses